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ODD BUSINESS CARD VERSION 2 by MolefaceNZ ODD BUSINESS CARD VERSION 2 by MolefaceNZ
REVISED VERSION OF PREVIOUS ODD BUSINESS CARD

CLICK HERE FOR OLD VERSION
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CREATED IN FREEHAND AND PHOTOSHOP

I uploaded the wood background if you want to use it >> [link]
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:iconmansy-graphics:
mansy-graphics Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
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MizzAshLo88 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
hey love the faded look with pinstripe... in the background of the business card.
could i have a copy of just the bg of the card by chance?
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sheksweet Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2008
omg!! your work is perfect!!! congratulations!!!!
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:icon98classic:
98classic Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008   Interface Designer
very nice, its been mentioned about the cmyk color scheme. first thing i thought was printer. nice cards tough, really like them. keep it up.
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rhianaaa Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2008
dude your like what 15? and you already set up your own business. :P. this is coool...and i know verrry very late! :)
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fake173 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2007
I'm really feeling this design!
Just one crit, in future use kerning
e.g. the word DE(gap)SIGN and also DET(gap)AIL.
My boss pointed this out to me on my first day at work 17years ago (sigh). Now you will see bad kerning everywhere.
Hope this helps and keep up the good work ;)
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2007  Student Interface Designer
oh yea, thanks never noticed the gaps before :D
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Shurakai-Zero Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
Overall, pretty nice, if a little eclectic. I'm not convinced of the cyan-magenta-yellow colour scheme though. It makes you look like you’re a printer, rather than a designer. I’d suggest using something in either a monochromatic or perhaps a split complementary colour scheme.
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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:iconmikomi26:
mikomi26 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007   Interface Designer
Very nice, i like the detail u did on this second version.
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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:iconcrazy-bree:
crazy-bree Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007
they are cool for sure, i like the whole design of it =] good work
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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seanpt Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007  Student General Artist
looks very pro;):D i'm sure they will promote bussiness for sure!:D
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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taho Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Alright, this is a bit unfair on my part since I love bright colors against suitcoat greys and blacks.. It's nice, I can't say more.
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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ultima-xxx Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2007
lol, nice wood panels!!! love it!!
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks :D
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:iconsidaryildirim:
sidaryildirim Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2007
cool design ...
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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:iconpeterifranco:
peterifranco Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2007   Interface Designer
awesome design
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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mclaranium Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007
3. I personally don't think you need to state 'graphic design, logo, advertising'—if its just 'graphic design' or ' communication design' those pretty much encompass all those element [...]

I agree :D

and it will be so much interesting the print system - I imagine some mixed system ... but it's a challenge iF you do it in serigraph :slow: it depends .. hahahaha :)
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Methodologi Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
Great design!
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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:iconrootout:
rootout Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
amazing
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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addictive9713 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2007
cool design .. love it :+fav:
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks :D
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avantgardedesigns Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2007
great work man.... its very appealing
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swffx Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2007
It makes use of the (IMO) overused elements, ie "stenciled/spraypainted" look, "fake" wings, but quite nicely. I do like the cyan-magenta-yellow.

One thing... with "Graphic design - logos - advertising", doesn't graphic design cover logos and advertising? You might want to nail down a specific category of graphic design, such as "print/web design" or something. Just my opinion, take or leave. Oh, and the CAPS ARE A bit headache-inducing, but that's not important. :)

Overall, rather nice.
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MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks for the advice
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:iconandypipkinnz:
Andypipkinnz Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007  Student
hello
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aCr0m-a Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
looks really great, nice concept and stuff, but I would lower the yellow lines' opacity. They distrub me oO
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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aCr0m-a Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007
np!
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theuncreative Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2007
Oliver,

I have some suggestions for your business card.


1. you don't need your logo on both sides (you don't want to overwhelm the viewer)
2. you might want to think about changing it from 'graphic designer' to communication designer (sounds more professional)
3. I personally don't think you need to state 'graphic design, logo, advertising'—if its just 'graphic design' or ' communication design' those pretty much encompass all those element so you don't need to clog up that small space with excess type.
4. If you have 'graphic design' under the 'oliver design detail' logo type—I don't think it is 100% necessary to have graphic designer under your name (all depends on how simple you want to go).
5. I sort of agree with the above comments about how the pink wires seem to be out of no where but the contrast in colors is aesthetically pleasing (to me at least)

Other than some minimal layout issue and simplifying it a little—I have to say this is probably one of my favorite cards I have seen as far as this style is concerned.
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mclaranium Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007
2. you might want to think about changing it from 'graphic designer' to communication designer (sounds more professional)

I'm thinking about it man.... SOUNDS more pro... :o

I used to reject the title Graphic Designer because I'm not, I'm Editorial Designer (it sounds to me more PRO). But reviewing my lessons and notes and books, I'm Graphic Designer.

You can't say "communication designer" because it means you Design Communication, or do you design the via of communication?? :confused: or do you mean a graphic designer is not professional? is for amateurs? :o
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theuncreative Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
Graphic Designer = Communication Designer. Communication is the act of getting a message across in an understandable manner (the media in which you choose to do this, be it print, web, speech...etc—is irrelevant)

A graphic designer communicates to its audience—hence communication designer.

and yeah, it sounds way better than 'Graphic designer'—(my personal opinion).
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MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2007  Student Interface Designer
cool, thanks for the comment and all the suggestions. I think I will go back to this and make some of the adjustments that you and others have made. I'm not 100% happy with the logo. I don't really like the middle of it, what do you think?
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105mm Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
same thing most ppl have said about the pink lines.

nice design, but a few technical hang ups perhaps.

the 3 colors in the 'logo' may muddy when you mass print the cards, because the colors are so close theres a lot of room for them to bleed into each other, the text may drown against the pinstripes too when its printed.

other than that, fucking nice work.
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks. Not sure I like to cyan magenta yellow colours in the logo. Want to put something else in the middle just not sure what
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msalah Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
very goOoOoOoOoOod
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thanks
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DreamSand Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Great design, well crafted!
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007  Student Interface Designer
thank you
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DreamSand Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
np
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TonioSite Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2007   Interface Designer
looks great...where did u get the background from?...
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:iconmolefacenz:
MolefaceNZ Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2007  Student Interface Designer
Can't remember where I got it from but I still have it on my computer so I submitted it to scraps
here it is [link]
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